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Webiste Critique Special Report: Kidorable

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Speaking of covering everything head to toe… today is a special report website critique for Kidorable, an acclaimed kids’ clothing and accessories company dressing little kids up right. Your email opt-in area is looking outdated as well, and it’s just too quiet to be drawing any kind of attention or sign-ups right now.

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Why Good Copywriting Goes Bad: Ignorance | Men With Pens

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Written by Agent X - 25 Comments When I get an email from pro copywriter Dean Rieck , I’m always happy. You have to be a pregnant woman in the morning and a retired trucker in the afternoon. Good copy will reveal that the emperor is has no clothes. You’re Just Ignorant. He’s a nice guy. Be a quick study.

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Is Your Education Useless? | Men With Pens

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Sonya – I do have to admit that most people who email me their resume and quote an English degree tend to have some of the worst writing in the world… Not sure why that is, actually. Now I can just work the job I want and retire happy&# I’m like, you moron, education never stops! Wish I knew. Reply Go ahead.

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Which Person Would You Talk To?

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Here’s your retirement cheque, go build your house, put in a pool, and stay with your girlfriend for the rest of your life,&# then I would probably kill myself. in person, on the phone, tape recorder, emailed questions…) 2. If I imagine someone said to me, “Kevin, thank you very much for your services. Reply Go ahead.

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